[stylist] a RANT

[Barbara Hammel]

I agree with Chris.  Those lines were the same that jumped out at me.

When you mention about the tantrum and the horn, it makes me think of the 
book "The Last Unicorn".

Barbara



Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. -- Carl Sandburg
-----Original Message----- 
From: Chris Kuell
Sent: Monday, February 18, 2013 8:15 AM
To: Writer's Division Mailing List
Subject: Re: [stylist] a RANT

Linda,

I enjoyed reading your rant poem. I especially like the lines:
They waited above the fractured waterfall.  In winter, the Niagara
is a frozen concrete lexicon, stacked to the apex with words.
and:
It spilled out, wet, blue ink all over the pristine white
pages. Splashing rude jagged, painful, condescending showers.

Great imagery there.

chris


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Lynda Lambert" <llambert at zoominternet.net>
To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Friday, February 15, 2013 3:16 PM
Subject: Re: [stylist] a RANT


I began writing the RANT poem about a year ago. I got it out and have spent
the entire day on it - tweaking and refining it.
Here it is, since it is a Sestina RANT, I attached it so it retains the
form.

Lynda Lambert
104 River Road
Ellwood City, PA 16117

724 758 4979

My Blog:  http://www.walkingbyinnervision.blogspot.com
My Website:  http://lyndalambert.com







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