[stylist] a very short story

[Bridgit Pollpeter]

I agree with Chris.

Bridgit

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From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Chris
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Hi Vejas,

Bridgit has already given you an excellent critique of your story, so I 
won't repeat what she's already said. I do like this story, as it is the

type of story that makes the reader think. It needs some polishing, but
I 
think this might be your best story on this list. Keep up the good work.

chris
 


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