[stylist] Here's my attempt at being tactile to the folks who want everything for nothing

[April Brown]

Hi Donna,

     I think it's great.  I'd emphasize one line though.

"I have to get someone else to drive."  Emphasize that you have to pay them out of pocket for time, gas, and wear and tear on the car.

Congrats!

April Brown

Writing dramatic adventure novels uncovering the myths we hide behind.