[stylist] Poem: "Snuff"

[William L Houts]

HI Bridgit,

Your relationship to poetry is very similar to mine.  I posted my idea 
of what my poem "Snuff" means to me, and that's something I rarely do.  
In my philosophy about these things, I think that it's my task as a poet 
to write the piece with as much craft and passion as I'm able to, and 
leave interpretation to the reader.  I do think some readings of a given 
poem are more interesting than others, but it's not the poets job to 
arbitrate that particular shooting match.  As Mr. Gibran teaches us, the 
finger writes, and having writ moves on.


--Bill






On 3/12/2014 8:27 PM, Bridgit Pollpeter wrote:
> I come from a school of thought that poetry is up to the reader in terms
> of meaning and emotion. Really any writing, but I learned in my poetry
> classes to not necessarily disect poetry word by word and sentence by
> sentence, but to look at it as a whole. Much like art.
>
> Bridgit
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> Shawn D
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> Bill
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> Thanks for sharing.  I'm not sure I get the whole thing from a first
> reading, but I get that you have an expressive way of writing.
>
> Shawn
>
> -----Original Message-----
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> Houts
> Sent: Monday, March 10, 2014 7:51 PM
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> Subject: [stylist] Poem: "Snuff"
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> Hi Stylists,
>
> Here's a short poem I wrote last summer.It's interesting to me because I
> was using a lot of rhyme last summer and this one barely has any.  The
> subject matter isn't very pretty, but I think this one may be one of my
> best, even if it's bad form to say so, ha.
>
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> --Bill
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> --Bill
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> The photo made me ill:that's how I knew.
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> This was no gaffe, no show for the marks
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> but murder:the plain motel bed,
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> and the eyes, god the eyes of dephless X.
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> Hewas naked,
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> this man reduced to the size
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> of someone's doll.The legs hung
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> over the bed's edge, and he lay,
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> his back flat, though beyond all rest,
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> all sight, all knowing. As if only
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> this camera, this eye
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> and the knifelike eye
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> behind it, unveiled how things really are:
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> a mansion of rooms without pity,
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> and their stunted ridiculous devils
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> O reader, with your outraged eye
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> you've had your monsters too:
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> your heartsblood thieves, your killers,
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> your stunted ridiculous devils
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> O reader,with your dog-nose truth,
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> your yes, your gifts of mending fire
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> you are the hope for us all.
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> and upon our stricken heads,
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> the gracious rains fall.
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> "Let's drink a toast now to who we really are."
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>             --Jane Siberry
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"Let's drink a toast now to who we really are."

           --Jane Siberry