[stylist] Poem - "A Spider"
Miss Thea
thearamsay at rogers.com
Sun Mar 16 23:56:55 UTC 2014
I love the tactile use of language, Bill.
Unfortunately, my flesh is crawling now.
I'll have to write something furry to get rid of that feeling.
But it is powerful
I see the remorse, and yet the reasoning: You didn't mean to kill her, yet
you felt bad.
I'm an insect-phobe though, so I'll have to wash. LOL
In Englishk, you made a pretty powerful impression on me.
Thea
-----Original Message-----
From: William L Houts
Sent: Sunday, March 16, 2014 9:57 AM
To: Writer's Division Mailing List
Subject: [stylist] Poem - "A Spider"
Hi Peeps,
Here's something I just dug up from one of my older, creakier poetry
folders. I wrote this sometime in my twenties, and I think it still
works. OH hell, why don't I just say it: I'm in love with this poem
and wouldn't edit it dfor a mint, LOL. I've written a few poems about
spiders, as I love the hideous little monsters somewhat, but this is
probably the best. Comments welcome, as always.
--Bill
---
Sprawled in my favorite chair,
I found a spider striving down
my sweater's cotton roads;
uncruel, I meant to brush her
from my collar to the floor,
but a brainless finger crushed her.
Drunk on ideas the size of salt,
her witty legs, those marvelous legs
had skittered her down the wall
to vistas of heaving; the ebb
and flo of my breathing.
A ruined husk. I didn't reckon
the difference between our lives,
the stellar gap between a spider's
life and mine: and this was my task,
for if it exists, a reckoning spider is
truly a monster, a foe to be fought.
But she was no monster,
and I was only a man in a chair,
reading, with no ill intent: and yet
that tiny walker died, a small
color in the world gone to gray
at my blameless finger's end.
--
"Let's drink a toast now to who we really are."
--Jane Siberry
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