[stylist] Help with a Research Paper

[kec92 at ourlink.net]

Hi all, 

As part of the research that I am doing for my project, I have to write
a paper. I have essentially finished th rough draft. Could I get some
feedback on areas of improvement and what is written well? I want to
make sure my paper is easily understood and can give useful information
to the reader. 

Thanks, 

Katie 
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