[stylist] Poem - "Paper Minds" - Second Draft

[William L Houts]

No, Chris, but thanks.  "Afterwise", is my own coinage, which is sort of 
naughty of me, but doing that is something I'm experimenting with.  
Thanks for the good word, though.




=--Bill




On 11/5/2014 6:22 AM, Chris Kuell wrote:
> Hi Bill,
>
> I  enjoyed both of the poems you posted today (last night?). I especially
> like the idea behind 'Paper Minds'. You had a few typos in that one, which I
> believe Linda pointed out. In 'Death', in the line:
> something precious persists afterwise,
>
> Did you mean 'afterwards'?
>
> Chris
>
>
>


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"Oh, Sophie!  Whyfore have you eated all de cheeldren?"