[stylist] A poem that I'm sure needs much work to look like its subject matter

[Jacobson, Shawn D]

Barbara

Quite well done.  I find a lot of modern poetry inaccessible (to be honest) but that one was well written and beautiful.

Shawn

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Subject: [stylist] A poem that I'm sure needs much work to look like its subject matter

Here’s a poem that I have incorporated most of my favorite words from a word list I’ve had for years been keeping.

   WOULD THAT I
    By Barbara Hammel

Would that I could write a rhyme
With language that of olden time,
I'd write of fragrant roses blown
And violets by a mossy stone,

I'd write of gentian's bluest eye --
A smallest bit of cerulean sky --
Of columbines all purple dressed
And how the lilacs are the best,

Of hyacinths purple and white and blue,
And how they're kissed by the morning dew.
I'd write of the zephyr that gently blows And how the rainbow brightly glows,

Would that I could write as they,
The poets of an earlier day.
The words they chose are flowers fair,
They are the spice of mountain air,

They are the fire in precious stones,
And the melodies within twelve tones,
They are the star's eternal flame,
They are Beauty by every name.

A freshly-fallen coat of snow,
The calm of ocean's ebb and flow,
They're constant as a running stream
And faithful as the soft moonbeam.

Would that I were gifted so,
As Bryant, Shelley, Longfellow,
As Riley, Whittier, Dunbar, Keats
As Emerson, Lowell, Guest and Yeats.




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