[stylist] Something in honor of National Poetry Month - comments welcomed

Chris Kuell ckuell at comcast.net
Mon Apr 20 14:25:25 UTC 2015


Hi Donna,

Thanks for sharing your chapter with us. I particularly like the Rushdie
quote, and the teacher's list of banned words. We could all benefit from
trying to avoid those words in our writing.

I also like your use of description in this chapter. Many blind writers
forget or omit descriptions, which is how readers draw the scenes in their
minds. 

Nice job.

Chris






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