[stylist] cinquaines

Barbara HAMMEL poetlori8 at msn.com
Tue Aug 4 21:46:52 UTC 2015


The horse fight one is powerful. The horses get angry then stop. You could feel the storm commence and subside. Summer needs to have two syllables in the last line. The last one is over my head. LOL! Greatjob!
Barbara

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> On Aug 4, 2015, at 15:15, EvaMarie Sanchez via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
> 
> Okay, I have picked three of my cinquaines to share with you here. It is
> funny, my first, which was citrine like Jackie's, is not on the list. That
> does not mean you will never see it though. I just thought this was a
> variety.
> I also found these to be great exercises. I wrote a couple on didgeridoos
> and am now expanding one into a greater work on the didgeridoo.
> So, thanks for the inspiration guys and here they are.
> 
> Horse fight
> 
> Flaring nostrils
> 
> Ears twitching to and fro
> 
> Wide eyes, snorting, bared teeth, arched neck
> 
> Retreat
> 
> 
> 
> Summer
> 
> Watermelon
> 
> Spitting seeds on the grass
> 
> Juice running down children’s faces
> 
> Smile
> 
> 
> 
> Bodhran
> 
> Dancing tapper
> 
> Sweeps up, down and around
> 
> Ancestors hear the drummers’ call
> 
> Newgrange
> 
> 
> Eve
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