[stylist] cinquaines

[Barbara HAMMEL]

I think most of us say smile with two syllables.

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> On Aug 4, 2015, at 17:04, EvaMarie Sanchez <3rdeyeonly at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> hahaha    I am laughing because you just brought up more memories.
> The difference between soft syllables and hard syllables. I guess hard syllables are necessaary for these types of things? I have always had what I call the "Princess and the Pea Syndrome". I am extremely sensitive to things others do not notice. Usually this is manifest in the physical, but I guess it relates here as well. When I speak, smile has two syllables.
> I will have to work on my OCD over this.
> As for horse fight, hmmm, different that was intended. I was thinking of the humans retreating from the area before getting caught in the inevitable event the signs were telling of. Either that, or get control of those horses. This was coming from memories of horseshows, training situations, being out on the trail or just out with the herd.
> I love that we come from different places and then inerpret things differently.
> I had not even thought of your way
> Eve.😆
> 😊😆😆😆
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>> On Tue, Aug 4, 2015 at 2:46 PM, Barbara HAMMEL <poetlori8 at msn.com> wrote:
>> The horse fight one is powerful. The horses get angry then stop. You could feel the storm commence and subside. Summer needs to have two syllables in the last line. The last one is over my head. LOL! Greatjob!
>> Barbara
>> 
>> Sent from my iPhone
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>> > On Aug 4, 2015, at 15:15, EvaMarie Sanchez via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
>> >
>> > Okay, I have picked three of my cinquaines to share with you here. It is
>> > funny, my first, which was citrine like Jackie's, is not on the list. That
>> > does not mean you will never see it though. I just thought this was a
>> > variety.
>> > I also found these to be great exercises. I wrote a couple on didgeridoos
>> > and am now expanding one into a greater work on the didgeridoo.
>> > So, thanks for the inspiration guys and here they are.
>> >
>> > Horse fight
>> >
>> > Flaring nostrils
>> >
>> > Ears twitching to and fro
>> >
>> > Wide eyes, snorting, bared teeth, arched neck
>> >
>> > Retreat
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > Summer
>> >
>> > Watermelon
>> >
>> > Spitting seeds on the grass
>> >
>> > Juice running down children’s faces
>> >
>> > Smile
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > Bodhran
>> >
>> > Dancing tapper
>> >
>> > Sweeps up, down and around
>> >
>> > Ancestors hear the drummers’ call
>> >
>> > Newgrange
>> >
>> >
>> > Eve
>> > President, National Federation of the Blind Northern Arizona
>> > President, National Federation of the Blind Writers' Division
>> > Committee Chair, Arizona Association of Guide Dog Users
>> > Affiliate Member, National Federation of the Blind Legislative Committee
>> > Affiliate Member, National Federation of the Blind Membership Committee
>> > Member, Slate & Style Editing Team
>> >
>> > "You do not need to have vision to see the stars."
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