[stylist] For Bill

Tue Aug 11 21:45:39 UTC 2015

Bill,
I am glad you are still out there. I wrote "An Otter on a Water Slide," but
I have entered it in a contest so am choosing to not send it to the list. If
it places, I will have to share it with you because you were the
inspiration.  
Do you find that you can keep up with this list without having to give
upyour prolific writing? I am afraid if I give up on my efforts to answer
everything in a timely way, I will again accumulate an impossible back log.
I need a better balance bar for this high-wire act.
Perhaps we should all agree to a break and make the vow to get one of our
creations done during this time published.  

Jackie Lee

Time is the school in which we learn.
Time is the fire in which we burn.
Delmore Schwartz	 

-----Original Message-----
From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of William L
Houts via stylist
Sent: Tuesday, August 11, 2015 2:59 AM
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Cc: William L Houts
Subject: Re: [stylist] Poem

Thank you so much, Jackie; it's much appreciated, especially as I think 
you are one of the greater talents here as well.  Hope your summer has 
gone swimmingly.

--Bill

On 8/10/2015 10:05 AM, Jackie Williams via stylist wrote:
> Sem,
> Please do not believe that rhyming poetry is out. Of all of my published
> work, it is about half and half.
> It is just that it is harder to write rhyming poetry because many of our
> examples by famous past poets use reversals of the modifying clause. (I
will
> think of the word in a minute. And some do not know the value of
enjambment
> to take the curse off of forced rhyme.
> If you write a hundred of them, you will learn what I mean.
> Our Bill uses rhyme in the most wonderful ways. Sometimes internal,
> sometimes at the end of a line. He has a beautiful knack for it, and if a
> rhyme is not available, he might invent a suitable word.
> The reason it is often frowned on my publishers is because they have
> received too many bad rhyming poems.
> Many contests still have categories for rhymed poetry. Many of them are
also
> humorous.
> At any rate, good luck with your poem.
>
> Jackie Lee
>
> Time is the school in which we learn.
> Time is the fire in which we burn.
> Delmore Schwartz	
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Semirhage
via
> stylist
> Sent: Sunday, August 09, 2015 10:56 PM
> To: Writers' Division Mailing List
> Cc: Semirhage
> Subject: Re: [stylist] Poem
>
> Hi, Chris and Jackie. Only recently did my husband and I learn that the
> rhyming poetry seems to be out. One day I"ll have to try writing something
> that doesn't rhyme. Not sure if it'd be easier or more difficult. Being in
> bands as I have, I'm used to writing songs, and they've always rhymed and
> songs are poetry, so...but we're not exactly in the poetry know, which is
> why I dare to comment so little to poetry. Thank you both for your words
and
>
> compliments. They make me  actually consider trying to get this one
> published for Halloween somewhere. I'll be looking into that and totally
let
>
> you know if anything poems of it. I am glad you liked the feel and found
it
> informative, Jackie. Perhaps that's because even though you're not into
> vampires this spoke, being written from the POV of the human servant of
> Dracula. So it was put from a human's POV, making it perhaps a little less
> foreign.
> I like some vampires, vampire books, movies,  ETC, and not others. But I
do
> have them featuring in my paranormal works as well as the fantasy ones,
and
> as they are popular as you said, I am hopeful that they'll get where they
> need to go when the right person sees them. Right now it's actually
getting
> an agent's attention that's our trouble. LOL. I'd not even mind being
> rejected if it meant one actually read something. *smiles*
> Sem
> I'm friends with the monster that's under my bed.
> I get along with the voices inside of my head.
>
>
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