[stylist] my Adelaide

[EvaMarie Sanchez]

hahaha    I just read through this thread and realized that I had a typo in
the cinquain.
hmmm,  Not sure if I will say what that typo is as you may think it works.
I am giving this some thought.
Eve

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President, National Federation of the Blind Writers' Division
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"You do not need to have vision to see the stars."

On Tue, Aug 11, 2015 at 2:27 PM, Myrna Badgerow via stylist <
stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:

> I love it!!!!
> Great job Eve!
> Myrna
>
> Sent from my iPhone
>
> > On Aug 11, 2015, at 10:13 AM, EvaMarie Sanchez via stylist <
> stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
> >
> > I realized that I had done what I said sometimes made things confusing. I
> > inserted a poem into someone else's thread.
> > Jackie wrote of Adelaide Crapsey and her most famous cinquain. Sorry you
> > are going to have to go there to see it. As a painter, I enjoyed doing
> > studies of many works by artists such as Serat, sorry if I spelled it
> > wrong.
> > As a writer, I have found I enjoy this as well. I have written a final
> > chapter to a classic Twain novel,  I have responded to Naruda by carrying
> > on what I felt was neglected in one of his pieces, and I am working on a
> > study of Poe.
> > So when Jackie showed the cinquain, I dived right in. Below is my
> endeavor.
> > I tried to bring the same energy as was in hers, while restructuring the
> > order.
> >
> > My Adelaide
> >
> >
> > The mouth
> >
> > Is sewn shut Dear,
> >
> > The frozen morn dost sleep
> >
> > And frigid is death buried, deep
> >
> > Silence.
> >
> >
> > I hope you enjoyed it, Eve
> > President, National Federation of the Blind Northern Arizona
> > President, National Federation of the Blind Writers' Division
> > Committee Chair, Arizona Association of Guide Dog Users
> > Affiliate Member, National Federation of the Blind Legislative Committee
> > Affiliate Member, National Federation of the Blind Membership Committee
> > Member, Slate & Style Editing Team
> >
> > "You do not need to have vision to see the stars."
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