[stylist] Goldstone

[Jackie Williams]

Eva Marie,
This was a very interesting article to me. It covers the subject from all angles, being quite comprehensive. I love knowing the meanings of rocks.
I will not attempt the critique the writing as nothing glared out at me as a problem.
As I read, I thought about the embedded stones on my longhorn skull. It has many what I have called "cat's eyes," but I am wondering if that is another name for gold stone.
Do you have a market for this article? It seems very marketable to me in its present form. 

Jackie Lee

Time is the school in which we learn.
Time is the fire in which we burn.
Delmore Schwartz	 


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Subject: [stylist] Goldstone

Hello Writers and Wits, I am attaching a paper I wrote in hopes that I get
critiqued. I do want your comments on this and edits. I always find, that
one should not edit their own work alone. Other eyes are a benefit. Yes,
pun intended.
 Thanks my friends,
Many Blessings to you all.
Eve
 President, National Federation of the Blind Northern Arizona
President, National Federation of the Blind Writers' Division
Committee Chair, Arizona Association of Guide Dog Users
Affiliate Member, National Federation of the Blind Legislative Committee
Affiliate Member, National Federation of the Blind Membership Committee
Member, Slate & Style Editing Team

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