[stylist] Revised Apple I am poem

[Bridgit Kuenning-Pollpeter]

I like this a lot. Good job.

Bridgit

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Subject: [stylist] Revised Apple I am poem

Hello all,

 

I pasted my revised poem below. Please let me know your thoughts.

Apple I am

Dark eyed glance

Carved abs, flirty black curls, large creamy hands

Darting to mask my manly abs with green plants

 

Large curvy chest

Carved abs, flirty red curls, long creamy legs

Dark red lips kiss, yirning for his dreamy caress

Darting to mask my dirty breasts

 

My wife had eaten her treat, tasting sweeter than the rest

I stand bleak, waiting for mother hens to birth Summer eggs

My hands beaten, plowing dirt for earth's harvest, bursts of sweat

I scam weak, speaking, He cursed me to squirm in dirt, suffer death

 

Darting to mask my manly abs with green plants

Carved abs, flirty black curls, large creamy hands

Dark eyed glance

Apple I am

 

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