[stylist] Writer's Rant: Unchain Me from This PC!

[Edward Green]

Hi Donna,

Good piece.  My only suggestion would be that if you want people to know who manufactures JAWS, I’d include a link to Freedom Scientific rather than include the company and address in the main body of the article, it disrupted the flow slightly for me.

Cheers,

Ed
> On 30 Jul 2015, at 18:54, Applebutter Hill via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
> 
> As some of you know, I've been seeking advice and info on getting a tablet
> or small laptop. After your suggestions, I did some shopping and had an
> experience that provoked a blog post out of me. I was going for a
> light-hearted piece that would capture the attention of sighted writers and
> computer users, but would contain a nugget of truth about what we as people
> who access the world nonvisually deal with in the way of accessibility
> issues. I'd appreciate it if you would read this and give me feedback about
> how it comes across. The link is below my name.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Donna
> 
> http://donnawhill.com/2015/07/28/writers-rant-unchain-me-from-this-pc/
> 
> 
> 
> 
> -- The Heart of Applebutter Hill - a novel on a mission:
> 
> http://DonnaWHill.com <http://donnawhill.com/> 
> 
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