[stylist] Revised Apple I am by JLA (poem)

[Bridgit Kuenning-Pollpeter]

I think this is your strongest poem yet, that I have read.

Bridgit

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Subject: [stylist] Revised Apple I am by JLA (poem)

Good afternoon all,

Please find my revised poem pasted below.

 

Apple I am by JLA

Apple I am

Dark eyed glance

Carved abs, flirty black curls, large creamy hands

Darting to grab my tweed grey pants

 

Large curvy chest

Carved abs, flirty red curls, long creamy legs

Dark red lips kiss, yirning for his dreamy caress

Darting to grab my red sleevless dress

 

My wife had eaten her treat, tasting sweeter than the rest

I stand bleak, waiting for mother hens to birth Summer eggs

My hands beaten, plowing dirt for earth's harvest, bursts of sweat

I scam weak, speaking, He cursed me to squirm in dirt, suffer death

 

Darting to grab my tweed grey pants

Carved abs, flirty black curls, large creamy hands

Dark eyed glance

Apple I am

 

 

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