[stylist] Greetings from a returning member

[Jacobson, Shawn D]

John

I will definitely read this; one thing the world needs is more Christian science fiction.

It might be a while before I give you a full review (I am sneaking peaks at this while at work) so stay tuned.

I did notice a couple of things early on.  You have "the the" in an early paragraph (lose one of the "the"s).

Also you don't have to say "The garage door opened at his command".  You can say "the garage door opened"; the "at his command" part can be implied.

Anyway the best.

Shawn Jacobson

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Hello,

Some of you may recognize my name as the originator of the liblouis Braille translation and back-translation software. I was on Stylist years ago, but I let my subscription lapse. Computer programming and advancing age were too demanding. Now I have retired as a software engineer. I'm trying to make a new career writing Christian science fiction. You can find my WIP by going to http://godtouches.org then stories. This will bring up a list of stories. The science-fiction one is "Space Friends Indeed". I would be really happy to hear your thoughts on it.

Thanks,
John

-- 
John J. Boyer, Executive Director
GodTouches Digital Ministry, Inc.
http://www.godtouches.org
Madison, Wisconsin, USA
Peace, Love, Service


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