[stylist] Shauns a story tomorrow's blossoms

Barbara HAMMEL poetlori8 at msn.com
Sat Sep 3 22:08:38 UTC 2016



Shawn, it will definitely need some editing with spell checking before you do anththing with it, but it was good, though I'm not really a sciFi kind of person either. Barbara Hammel

> On Sep 3, 2016, at 16:41, Shelley Alongi via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
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> I wrote a response to this but that it ended up at the very end of the message I thought I had gone to the top of the screen. Anyway, so I will write my response again so you can actually read it without having to go all the way down to the bottom. Anyway, I loved your story. I am not a fan of science fiction but I really like that one. Maybe the first line got my attention because I'm a gardener now and I do have a pair of gloves but I don't use them very often. I should just say I'm picking up and waiting right now not actually planting anything. Trying to keep the plants from taking over so I can plan things.
> I don't have any problem with the names I think they are all just fine. I read this story twice and I usually don't do that. I just like the way it flows and it is a very interesting concept so I hope you will enter it into a contest. You may have said that on the conference call last week but I didn't get that part. If you do enter it into a contest I think that would be a very good thing. Keep writing. :-)
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> Shelley, Queen of Bells Out!
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> See Trespasser, my first published novel at lulu.com
> http://www.lulu.com/Queenofbells712
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