[Stylist] New story--"the Man Who Could Only be Human"

[Jackie Williams]

Shawn,
Wow! I not only enjoyed your new story, I re-read the previous one. I had
not remembered the details.
It goes together quite seamlessly and added some intriguing details about
what the spirit people can do.
I thought the characterization was good, and the details really kept the
interest at a high pitch.
I thought I heard two little typos, but cannot tell you exactly. I think one
was a singular term for what should have been a plural. Or possibly it was
the reverse.
I think you said you had the first published already.
Good luck with this addition.
I usually do not read science fiction. You had some rather futuristic
scientific concepts at play in this story.
It took a while to get back to this with the time to do it justice.

Jackie Lee


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From: Stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Jacobson,
Shawn D via Stylist
Sent: Thursday, April 12, 2018 10:35 AM
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Cc: Jacobson, Shawn D
Subject: [Stylist] New story--"the Man Who Could Only be Human"

Dear Stylist.

I am attaching my new story, "The Man Who Could Only be Human" it is about
5,800 words long.

This is in the same universe as "On Memory Lanes"; I am also attaching this
story.

I hope you enjoy it.

If you have any critiques, please let me know.

Shawn