[Stylist] Does modified wording in A line sound better?

[Barbara HAMMEL]

I like what you did for the "blood flow" change. I still think "thorn-crowned" sounds more poetic than the "crown of thorns" that is always used. (But that's just me, and this is your poem.)        Barbara Hammel

> On Mar 25, 2019, at 18:07, Jennifer Applegate via Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
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> Anointed Son prayed to heavenly Father on Mount of Olives, sacrificed
> crimson blood from hands and feet nailed to Calvary's cross as crown of
> thorns pierced His head, paid fettered slaves' sin debts
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