[Stylist] Book Description

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Hey Michael,

 

You have a typo in your last sentence (rad should be read) but otherwise I
think this reads pretty well. Good luck.

 

Chris

 

 

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Subject: [Stylist] Book Description

 

Hello All!

 

This is my first post to this email list. I'd like to ask for your feedback
if that's alright. I'm close to publishing my first short story to Kindle.
I'm publishing it as what Amazon calls, a Short Read. The story is complete
and I'm now needing a book jacket description. I wanted to post my
description here and ask for your comments, critiques, and suggestions. So,
my plans are to write and publish five more short stories as part of a
series, then collect them  all and re-publish them as an anthology. The name
of the series is Guardians of Luum. The story is young adult fantasy
fiction. This first story is entitled, Guardians of Luum: the Shop. The
story is 36 pages long and the description I've written is about 169 words.
I've pasted a copy of the description below. Constructive criticism is
welcome. Thanks!

 

Description:

Luum is a lush, enchanted world, brimming with powerful magic, majestic
landscapes, and the most fantastic creatures ever seen. It is a treasure,
and a tempting target for malevolent Gods and those who wish to become Gods
themselves. Luum is under constant threat and so it needs its guardians and
of course.its heroes.

 

Fourteen-year old Jason and his older brother Kenny often help their father
out with the family merchant business. Today, they're given the task of
travelling deep into the woods where they'll find and old shop  owned by Mr.
Bashid. And what are they supposed to do there? Well make a simple trade of
course. And they even have crotchety old Tamuk the Mage , to keep them
company. All in all, a fairly common chore to get done, but today promises
to be a day these three will never forget. It all starts with Jason using
his magical talent, some flesh eating beetles and.well, you'll have to rad
the rest of the story to find out. 

 

 

 

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