<html><head></head><body name="Mail Message Editor"><div><span class="Apple-style-span">There is a lot of interest right now in controlling gangs, so I'd say go with it, so long as the method(s) used to extract the gang member would be useful for your readers.<div><span class="Apple-style-span" style="">Lori</span></div></span></div><div id="replyPrefaceElement">On May 7, 2010, at 4:57:11 PM, BDM <lists@braddunsemusic.com> wrote:</div><br><blockquote style="padding-left: 5px; margin-left: 5px; border-left-width: 2px; border-left-style: solid; border-left-color: blue; color: blue; "><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: medium; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; "><div style="width: 749px; "><div id="felix-mail-header-block" style="color: black; background-color: white; border-bottom-width: 1px; border-bottom-style: solid; border-bottom-color: silver; padding-bottom: 1em; margin-bottom: 1em; width: 749px; "><table border="0" cellpadding="1" cellspacing="1" width="100%"><tbody><tr><td width="70px" style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 8pt; color: gray; text-align: right; vertical-align: top; font-weight: bold; "><span>From:</span></td><td style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 8pt; color: black; text-align: left; vertical-align: top; padding-left: 5px; "><span title="BDM <lists@braddunsemusic.com>">BDM <lists@braddunsemusic.com></span></td></tr><tr><td width="70px" style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 8pt; color: gray; text-align: right; vertical-align: top; font-weight: bold; "><span>Subject:</span></td><td style=
"font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 8pt; color: black; text-align: left; vertical-align: top; padding-left: 5px; "><span style="font-weight: bold; ">[stylist] Feedback request</span></td></tr><tr><td width="70px" style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 8pt; color: gray; text-align: right; vertical-align: top; font-weight: bold; "><span>Date:</span></td><td style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 8pt; color: black; text-align: left; vertical-align: top; padding-left: 5px; "><span>May 7, 2010 4:57:11 PM EDT</span></td></tr><tr><td width="70px" style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 8pt; color: gray; text-align: right; vertical-align: top; font-weight: bold; "><span>To:</span></td><td style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 8pt; color: black; text-align: left; vertical-align: top; padding-left: 5px; "><span title=""Writers Division" <stylist@nfbnet.org>">"Writers Division" <stylist@nfbnet.org></span></td></tr><tr id="felix-attachment-header-block"><td width="70px" style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 8pt; color: gray; text-align: right; vertical-align: top; font-weight: bold; "><span>Attachments:</span></td><td style="font-family: 'Lucida Grande'; font-size: 8pt; color: black; text-align: left; vertical-align: top; padding-left: 5px; "><span>1 Attachment, 77.5 KB</span></td></tr></tbody></table></div><div id="felix-mail-content-block" style="color: black; background-color: white; width: 749px; "><div style="font-family: monospace; color: black; background-color: white; font-size: 8pt; ">Hi List,<br><br>I have an idea for a book, a suspenseful mystery surrounding the extraction<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>of a gang member by a team of folks. The reader does not know or isn't let<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>in on the connection of the team members until the end along with the gang<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>member now with a new life change. Last year my wife and I were goin
g to<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>take a November 50,000 word challenge done by a writer's org, I can't<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>recall now. At any rate I made it about 5000 words and have tweaked it<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>here and there, but I wonder if what I have holds interest enough, if its<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>moving forward enough? If it is worth pursuing from here, I'll invest time<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>into applying the punctuation guides I've gotten here :). This is a first<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>crack at any project of this size/nature. File attached in 2003 Word Doc,<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>any feedback is appreciated, short or detailed comments welcome.<br><br>Rating is:<br><br>*Some violence<br>*One explitive :)<br><br>Thanks in advance.<br><br>Brad<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br><br></div><div style="font-family: monospace; color: black; background-color: white; font-size: 8pt; ">_______________________________________________<br>Writers Division web site:<br>http://www.nfb-writers-division.org <http://www.nfb-writers-division.org/><br><br>stylist mailing list<br>stylist@nfbnet.org<br>http://www.nfbnet.org/mailman/listinfo/stylist_nfbnet.org<br>To unsubscribe, change your list options or get your account info for stylist:<br>http://www.nfbnet.org/mailman/options/stylist_nfbnet.org/loristay%40aol.com<br><br></div></div></div></span></blockquote><div><span class="Apple-style-span"><br></span></div><div class="aol_ad_footer" id="uD8CE716E56864C56AFDE667FCDD6E819"></div></body></html>