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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-ZW link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Hi Jackie,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Good questions. Thanks for asking.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Yes, I used the 3/5/3 intentionally. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>The poem is a Japanese form, and Japanese syllabic count is very different than English.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>So this creates a dilemma for those who choose to write in English. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>You can find some fantastic information on this topic by visiting the Tanka Society of America site.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <a href="http://www.tankasocietyofamerica.org/">http://www.tankasocietyofamerica.org/</a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>In particular, there is a great link that discusses this issue very well.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><a href="http://www.tankasocietyofamerica.org/tanka-teachers-guide">http://www.tankasocietyofamerica.org/tanka-teachers-guide</a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>This publication gives a lot of insight into the aesthetics of the tanka, and it applies quite a lot to Haiku as well<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'> Haiku and Tanka appear, at first blush to be very easy to write. When we dip into the Japanese<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Forms in poetry we soon learn more about them and find that we opened a door that takes us places we never dreamed of going. Mysteries. Complexities.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>I think I can spend my lifetime exploring these 2 Japanese forms, and still have so far to go. Hope this helps. Lynda<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span lang=EN-US>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US> Stylist <stylist-bounces@nfbnet.org> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Jackie via Stylist<br><b>Sent:</b> Monday, March 30, 2020 2:54 PM<br><b>To:</b> 'Writers' Division Mailing List' <stylist@nfbnet.org><br><b>Cc:</b> Jackie <jackieleepoet@cox.net><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Stylist] Haiku for Spring<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>Lynda,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>A lovely Haiku.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>It uses the syllable count I think of as the standard. Your directions to the group had 3-5-3 instead. I thought that form had a different name. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>In the classroom, starting poetry classes always use the 5-7-5 form. I think this is a bit less intimidating as it is a bit easier.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'>You are a connoisseur of the Japanese forms, so I would like comments. I am not.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Jacqueline Williams<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'>Clarity is just questioning having eaten its fill.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#1F497D'> Jenny Xie<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><b><span lang=EN-US>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US> Stylist [<a href="mailto:stylist-bounces@nfbnet.org">mailto:stylist-bounces@nfbnet.org</a>] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Linda Lambert via Stylist<br><b>Sent:</b> Sunday, March 29, 2020 9:59 AM<br><b>To:</b> 'Writers' Division Mailing List' <<a href="mailto:stylist@nfbnet.org">stylist@nfbnet.org</a>><br><b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:llambert@zoominternet.net">llambert@zoominternet.net</a><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Stylist] Haiku for Spring<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'>Sunday PM Greetings.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'>This was what I experienced last evening when I was outside.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in'>I had to come back to the house to bring my husband to experience this exceptional evening. 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