[nagdu] Your critique Invited!

[Steven Johnson]

Marion, it is straight to the point, and from my viewpoint, contains the
*essential information* that the general public needs to know.  Any more
details would be overkill.

Steve Johnson, WAGDU President
Wisconsin Association of Guide Dog Users

-----Original Message-----
From: nagdu-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:nagdu-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf
Of Marion Gwizdala
Sent: Saturday, May 14, 2011 2:14 PM
To: NAGDU List; Michael Hingson; Sherrill O'Brien; Toni Whaley; Margo
Downey; Meghan Whalen; Tina Thomas; Correspondence Committee Mailing List
Subject: [nagdu] Your critique Invited!

Dear All,
    As president of the National Asociation of Guide Dog Users, I am editing
our brochure. I have attached the edits I have made and would like the input
of those who I trust to help in such endeavors. As a guide dog user, I know
what I want the public to know, but would like to know if there is anything
"the public" would like to know that I might have missed! I would also like
to know if you have any better suggestions for the title of this piece. My
deadline to submit the final copy is Monday, so please offer your feedback
before then!

Peace!
Marion Gwizdala