[nagdu] Your critique Invited!
Jeffrey Young
jeff.young8806 at gmail.com
Sat May 14 19:33:35 UTC 2011
I like it. All though some uneducated people might think a leash correction is more than a firm tug, :)
Good work.
Jeff and Hansel
On May 14, 2011, at 1:29 PM, Marion Gwizdala wrote:
> steve,
> Do you have any suggestions for a different title?
>
> Marion
>
>
> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Steven Johnson" <blinddog3 at charter.net>
> To: "'NAGDU Mailing List, the National Association of Guide Dog Users'" <nagdu at nfbnet.org>
> Sent: Saturday, May 14, 2011 3:24 PM
> Subject: Re: [nagdu] Your critique Invited!
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>
>> Marion, it is straight to the point, and from my viewpoint, contains the
>> *essential information* that the general public needs to know. Any more
>> details would be overkill.
>>
>> Steve Johnson, WAGDU President
>> Wisconsin Association of Guide Dog Users
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: nagdu-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:nagdu-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf
>> Of Marion Gwizdala
>> Sent: Saturday, May 14, 2011 2:14 PM
>> To: NAGDU List; Michael Hingson; Sherrill O'Brien; Toni Whaley; Margo
>> Downey; Meghan Whalen; Tina Thomas; Correspondence Committee Mailing List
>> Subject: [nagdu] Your critique Invited!
>>
>> Dear All,
>> As president of the National Asociation of Guide Dog Users, I am editing
>> our brochure. I have attached the edits I have made and would like the input
>> of those who I trust to help in such endeavors. As a guide dog user, I know
>> what I want the public to know, but would like to know if there is anything
>> "the public" would like to know that I might have missed! I would also like
>> to know if you have any better suggestions for the title of this piece. My
>> deadline to submit the final copy is Monday, so please offer your feedback
>> before then!
>>
>> Peace!
>> Marion Gwizdala
>>
>>
>>
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