[nagdu] Your critique Invited!

[Marion Gwizdala]

Jeff,
    Thank you for taking a look at it! As per my question to Steve, do you 
have any suggestions for a new title?

Marion


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Jeffrey Young" <jeff.young8806 at gmail.com>
To: "NAGDU Mailing List, the National Association of Guide Dog Users" 
<nagdu at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Saturday, May 14, 2011 3:33 PM
Subject: Re: [nagdu] Your critique Invited!


>I like it. All though some uneducated people might think a leash correction 
>is more than a firm tug, :)
>
> Good work.
>
> Jeff and Hansel
> On May 14, 2011, at 1:29 PM, Marion Gwizdala wrote:
>
>> steve,
>>   Do you have any suggestions for a different title?
>>
>> Marion
>>
>>
>> ----- Original Message ----- From: "Steven Johnson" 
>> <blinddog3 at charter.net>
>> To: "'NAGDU Mailing List, the National Association of Guide Dog Users'" 
>> <nagdu at nfbnet.org>
>> Sent: Saturday, May 14, 2011 3:24 PM
>> Subject: Re: [nagdu] Your critique Invited!
>>
>>
>>> Marion, it is straight to the point, and from my viewpoint, contains the
>>> *essential information* that the general public needs to know.  Any more
>>> details would be overkill.
>>>
>>> Steve Johnson, WAGDU President
>>> Wisconsin Association of Guide Dog Users
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: nagdu-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:nagdu-bounces at nfbnet.org] On 
>>> Behalf
>>> Of Marion Gwizdala
>>> Sent: Saturday, May 14, 2011 2:14 PM
>>> To: NAGDU List; Michael Hingson; Sherrill O'Brien; Toni Whaley; Margo
>>> Downey; Meghan Whalen; Tina Thomas; Correspondence Committee Mailing 
>>> List
>>> Subject: [nagdu] Your critique Invited!
>>>
>>> Dear All,
>>>   As president of the National Asociation of Guide Dog Users, I am 
>>> editing
>>> our brochure. I have attached the edits I have made and would like the 
>>> input
>>> of those who I trust to help in such endeavors. As a guide dog user, I 
>>> know
>>> what I want the public to know, but would like to know if there is 
>>> anything
>>> "the public" would like to know that I might have missed! I would also 
>>> like
>>> to know if you have any better suggestions for the title of this piece. 
>>> My
>>> deadline to submit the final copy is Monday, so please offer your 
>>> feedback
>>> before then!
>>>
>>> Peace!
>>> Marion Gwizdala
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
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