[nagdu] Your critique Invited!

[Steven Johnson]

Let me think on that for a bit.  I am thinking that the word public should
be in the title at some point with a direction leaning toward...
Understanding the role of Dog Guides in Public

Steve

-----Original Message-----
From: nagdu-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:nagdu-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf
Of Marion Gwizdala
Sent: Saturday, May 14, 2011 2:29 PM
To: NAGDU Mailing List, the National Association of Guide Dog Users
Subject: Re: [nagdu] Your critique Invited!

steve,
    Do you have any suggestions for a different title?

Marion


----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Steven Johnson" <blinddog3 at charter.net>
To: "'NAGDU Mailing List, the National Association of Guide Dog Users'" 
<nagdu at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Saturday, May 14, 2011 3:24 PM
Subject: Re: [nagdu] Your critique Invited!


> Marion, it is straight to the point, and from my viewpoint, contains the
> *essential information* that the general public needs to know.  Any more
> details would be overkill.
>
> Steve Johnson, WAGDU President
> Wisconsin Association of Guide Dog Users
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: nagdu-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:nagdu-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf
> Of Marion Gwizdala
> Sent: Saturday, May 14, 2011 2:14 PM
> To: NAGDU List; Michael Hingson; Sherrill O'Brien; Toni Whaley; Margo
> Downey; Meghan Whalen; Tina Thomas; Correspondence Committee Mailing List
> Subject: [nagdu] Your critique Invited!
>
> Dear All,
>    As president of the National Asociation of Guide Dog Users, I am 
> editing
> our brochure. I have attached the edits I have made and would like the 
> input
> of those who I trust to help in such endeavors. As a guide dog user, I 
> know
> what I want the public to know, but would like to know if there is 
> anything
> "the public" would like to know that I might have missed! I would also 
> like
> to know if you have any better suggestions for the title of this piece. My
> deadline to submit the final copy is Monday, so please offer your feedback
> before then!
>
> Peace!
> Marion Gwizdala
>
>
>
>
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