[Nfb-editors] Article feedback

[Mike Freeman]

Unlike Bridgit, I see.no reason to change phraseology merely for the sake of novelty or writing creativity.  Our tried and true vocabulary is accurate and accuracy is more important than poetry!

Mike Freeman
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On May 4, 2011, at 6:00, "Chris Kuell" <ckuell at comcast.net> wrote:

> Thanks to those who took the time to read and comment on my article. Since folks seemed to think it was okay, I'll go ahead and put it into our Fall newsletter. And thanks, Bridget, for pointing out those phrases which have become cliché in NFB literature. That was an excellent point, although those phrases are concise and say exactly what I mean and are almost reflexive at this point. I mean, can you think of another way to say 'with proper training and a positive attitude...'?Writing challenge for the day!
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> chris
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