[Nfbmo] Draft Agenda

[Gene Fleeman]

Mr. President, these are my suggestions:


In the first paragraph, I would suggest putting a period after stockyards,
we have it all. The Kansas City Royals and Kansas City Chiefs show that we
are competitive and we are winners.

In the second paragraph, I would put a comma after measure and a comma
after past.

In the registration paragraph, page 3 thee should be a comma after
Saturday. Comma after Also in the last sentence of that para.

Page 4:

7:00 PM      Informal Gathering—unhosted, unscripted    Consider putting a
-between un and hosted.

If you reduce one line space after “The Board Room”, it will allow Grand
Salon C to be on the same page with “Business Meeting, Diabetes Action
Network”   And should also help page 5 with the same kind of issue.

If you could minimize the line spaces by one size between events on page 6,
so “Smith, Chair” would be on the same page with Melissa.


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On Wed, Mar 22, 2017 at 11:53 AM, Gary Wunder via Nfbmo <nfbmo at nfbnet.org>
wrote:

> Okay, folks. Put on your proofreading glasses or thoroughly clean your
> proofreading fingers. There are a couple of places where we are still in
> definite in terms of titles, but I want to get this out, and I want to see
> if any of you have corrections. I think we might use some enhancements
> regarding what we say about Kansas City. Please be keen to anything I may
> have promised and left off, though only the master of the universe will
> know
> where we can fit something else and.
>
>
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> Please do not revise the document-- I will appreciate all of the changes,
> but I can't incorporate fifteen documents into one. Please note the changes
> that you suggest either in the body of an email or in a Word document you
> attach.
>
>
>
> Warmly,
>
>
>
> Gary
>
>
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