[stylist] What do you think of this page?

[Judith Bron]

Angela, It reads fine to me.  Good going!  Judith
  ----- Original Message ----- 
  From: Angela fowler 
  To: 'NFBnet Writer's Division Mailing List' 
  Sent: Thursday, December 18, 2008 5:24 PM
  Subject: [stylist] What do you think of this page?


  I posted this on my web site, but it seems incomplete to me. I don't think
  it conveys the entire message, it seems a bit curt, or preachy, or something
  like that. Any ideas? 
   
  Thank you
   
  Angela Fowler
   
  fowlers at syix.com
   



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