[stylist] sample of work rewritten. 3rd attempt.

[Fred Wurtzel]

Hello,

Redundancies are rarely acceptable.  Use of modifying  words is acceptable.
I guess each writer will decide how to work with rules of grammar.  It is my
suspicion that the editors who pay writers have their standards, also.  

Warmest Regards,

Fred

-----Original Message-----
From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
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Subject: Re: [stylist] sample of work rewritten. 3rd attempt.

not always.  sometimes redundancies serve to 
emphasize, or are necessary for flow in a particular passage.
jc

Jim Canaday M.A.
Lawrence, KS

At 01:00 PM 10/27/2008, you wrote:
>Our language has lots of redundancies.   Good writers will spot and
eliminate
>them.
>Lori
>In a message dated 10/26/08 11:29:14 PM, f.wurtzel at comcast.net writes:
>
>
> > Hi Jim,
> >
> > I agree it is common and, in my opinion, redundant.  Many people also
say
> > "refer back" or "remand back" which are 
> clearly bad usage by virtue of their
> > redundancy.  I feel "exact same" falls into the same category.
> >
> > Warm Regards,
> >
> > Fred
> >
> >
>
>
>
>
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