[stylist] last chapter

[helene ryles]

About the Frilly dress,
Nadia wore those kind of dresses before her mother took her and made
her dress like a boy.
Although she could have chosen girl's clothes when Wendy took her
shopping, it's taken time to sink in.
After all the period of time when she was living with her aunt she was
still quite young (between the ages of 2 and 9).

Helene

On 05/11/2009, helene ryles <dreamavdb at googlemail.com> wrote:
> Judith: Thanks for your advice.
> This is my second attempt at ending the book. I think endings are
> hard. A lot of books I really like have lousy endings.
>
> It was meant to end on a cliff hanger, with Madrella still out on the
> loose.
>
> Helene
>
> On 04/11/2009, Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net> wrote:
>> Helene, I read the last chapter.  The ending is open ended.  I understand
>> that you want to write a sequil, but the story itself has to come to some
>> sort of conclusion.  Question: Is Nadia wearing a frill dress like a
>> young
>> girl symbolic of her immaturity?  That point isn't clear.
>> My advice is to put it away for awhile and come back in a month or two
>> with
>> new eyes.  I've done that.  It helps a lot.  Judith
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