[stylist] last chapter

[helene ryles]

Judith: Thanks for your advice.
This is my second attempt at ending the book. I think endings are
hard. A lot of books I really like have lousy endings.

It was meant to end on a cliff hanger, with Madrella still out on the loose.

Helene

On 04/11/2009, Judith Bron <jbron at optonline.net> wrote:
> Helene, I read the last chapter.  The ending is open ended.  I understand
> that you want to write a sequil, but the story itself has to come to some
> sort of conclusion.  Question: Is Nadia wearing a frill dress like a young
> girl symbolic of her immaturity?  That point isn't clear.
> My advice is to put it away for awhile and come back in a month or two with
> new eyes.  I've done that.  It helps a lot.  Judith
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