[stylist] Flirting with Monday Chapters 20 through 25

[Shelley J. Alongi]

Hi Guys, I'm going to send these last chapters to you as an attachment. Hope it goes through. If it doesn't I'll send each chaper separately. Based on your input from chapters 1 through 19 I've gone and looked at some sentence structure and dialog tags. I haven't changed anything about Glen's personality. Glen changes his own personality he doesn't need my help chuckles. All the elements are now present for the continuing of the story they just need to sort themselves out. This is what I've written so far and I wanted you to see the rest of it. Just a note from the peanut gallery, rereading chapter 21 made me teary-eyed and it was my writing. chucles. Feel free to chime in with comments and suggestions. I really appreciate you all looking at my work. I'm working on chapter 26 now. And by the way if anyone has been following my Metrolink111 essays lately you'll notice I've been talking a lot about an engineer whose name is Glen. Be assured the real Glen in the locomotive cab at the fullerton train station is not the same Glen in my story. I chose my character's name, or did he choose it, long before I knew about Glen the engineer, the one who smiles at me from the cab. Or do I smile at him. He sees me. It's great teasing for the Fullerton fans who sit on the patio. Just thought I'd let you know that so there wouldn't be any confusion. 
Shelley J. Alongi 
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"What sparked your interest in trains?"
"The face of an engineer who knew he was going to get killed by a freight train."
---SJA for anyone who wants to know
To read essays on my journey through the Chatsworth train accident, Metrolink 111 or other interests click on http://www.storymania.com/cgibin/sm2/smshowauthorbox.cgi?page=&author=AlongiSJ&alpha=A

updated September 24, 2009
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