[stylist] Flirting with Monday Chapters 20 through 25

[Judith Bron]

Shelly, Fabulous ending!  As a reader, I wonder what would happen if Glenn's 
child suddenly showed up at his doorstep?  Just a thought, Judith
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From: "Shelley J. Alongi" <qobells at roadrunner.com>
To: "NFBnet Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Saturday, October 03, 2009 11:31 PM
Subject: [stylist] Flirting with Monday Chapters 20 through 25


Hi Guys, I'm going to send these last chapters to you as an attachment. Hope 
it goes through. If it doesn't I'll send each chaper separately. Based on 
your input from chapters 1 through 19 I've gone and looked at some sentence 
structure and dialog tags. I haven't changed anything about Glen's 
personality. Glen changes his own personality he doesn't need my help 
chuckles. All the elements are now present for the continuing of the story 
they just need to sort themselves out. This is what I've written so far and 
I wanted you to see the rest of it. Just a note from the peanut gallery, 
rereading chapter 21 made me teary-eyed and it was my writing. chucles. Feel 
free to chime in with comments and suggestions. I really appreciate you all 
looking at my work. I'm working on chapter 26 now. And by the way if anyone 
has been following my Metrolink111 essays lately you'll notice I've been 
talking a lot about an engineer whose name is Glen. Be assured the real Glen 
in the locomotive cab at the fullerton train station is not the same Glen in 
my story. I chose my character's name, or did he choose it, long before I 
knew about Glen the engineer, the one who smiles at me from the cab. Or do I 
smile at him. He sees me. It's great teasing for the Fullerton fans who sit 
on the patio. Just thought I'd let you know that so there wouldn't be any 
confusion.
Shelley J. Alongi
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"What sparked your interest in trains?"
"The face of an engineer who knew he was going to get killed by a freight 
train."
---SJA for anyone who wants to know
To read essays on my journey through the Chatsworth train accident, 
Metrolink 111 or other interests click on 
http://www.storymania.com/cgibin/sm2/smshowauthorbox.cgi?page=&author=AlongiSJ&alpha=A

updated September 24, 2009


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