[stylist] Flirting with Monday Chapters 20 through 25

[Shelley J. Alongi]

We'll see howo it goes with Allison; she's making an appearance Glen just 
has to tell me how it happens. But first we have to meet Matthew martinez. 
He's our next adventure. Remember he's the teenager Glen mentions once or 
twice in the first chapters. He's got his own story. Glen sure has a lot of 
stories to tell me hasn't he. Hope he has time between shifts.
Shelley J. Alongi
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"What sparked your interest in trains?"
"The face of an engineer who knew he was going to get killed by a freight 
train."
---SJA for anyone who wants to know
To read essays on my journey through the Chatsworth train accident, 
Metrolink 111 or other interests click on 
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updated September 24, 2009
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net>
To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Sunday, October 04, 2009 9:04 PM
Subject: Re: [stylist] Flirting with Monday Chapters 20 through 25


> Shelly, Fabulous ending!  As a reader, I wonder what would happen if 
> Glenn's child suddenly showed up at his doorstep?  Just a thought, Judith
> ----- Original Message ----- 
> From: "Shelley J. Alongi" <qobells at roadrunner.com>
> To: "NFBnet Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
> Sent: Saturday, October 03, 2009 11:31 PM
> Subject: [stylist] Flirting with Monday Chapters 20 through 25
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> Hi Guys, I'm going to send these last chapters to you as an attachment. 
> Hope it goes through. If it doesn't I'll send each chaper separately. 
> Based on your input from chapters 1 through 19 I've gone and looked at 
> some sentence structure and dialog tags. I haven't changed anything about 
> Glen's personality. Glen changes his own personality he doesn't need my 
> help chuckles. All the elements are now present for the continuing of the 
> story they just need to sort themselves out. This is what I've written so 
> far and I wanted you to see the rest of it. Just a note from the peanut 
> gallery, rereading chapter 21 made me teary-eyed and it was my writing. 
> chucles. Feel free to chime in with comments and suggestions. I really 
> appreciate you all looking at my work. I'm working on chapter 26 now. And 
> by the way if anyone has been following my Metrolink111 essays lately 
> you'll notice I've been talking a lot about an engineer whose name is 
> Glen. Be assured the real Glen in the locomotive cab at the fullerton 
> train station is not the same Glen in my story. I chose my character's 
> name, or did he choose it, long before I knew about Glen the engineer, the 
> one who smiles at me from the cab. Or do I smile at him. He sees me. It's 
> great teasing for the Fullerton fans who sit on the patio. Just thought 
> I'd let you know that so there wouldn't be any confusion.
> Shelley J. Alongi
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> "What sparked your interest in trains?"
> "The face of an engineer who knew he was going to get killed by a freight 
> train."
> ---SJA for anyone who wants to know
> To read essays on my journey through the Chatsworth train accident, 
> Metrolink 111 or other interests click on 
> http://www.storymania.com/cgibin/sm2/smshowauthorbox.cgi?page=&author=AlongiSJ&alpha=A
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> updated September 24, 2009
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