[stylist] Trials of an honorary Dragon chapter 30 (Last chapter) Please comment.

[helene ryles]

Lori: have you read the entire book? Or just chapters here and there?
I'm just asking.

I did mean to end on a cliff hanger.

Helene

On 30/10/2009, LoriStay at aol.com <LoriStay at aol.com> wrote:
> The story doesn't seem finished, somehow.
>
> Also, please have the entire book proofread for proper spelling of the word
> "than," as well as consistency of tenses and other punctuation problems.
> Lori
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