[stylist] Trials of an honorary Dragon chapter 30 (Last chapter) Please comment.

[helene ryles]

Hi Lori,
Where can I get it proofread? What I've already made revisions on what
I sent to this list.

Helene

On 30/10/2009, helene ryles <dreamavdb at googlemail.com> wrote:
> Lori: have you read the entire book? Or just chapters here and there?
> I'm just asking.
>
> I did mean to end on a cliff hanger.
>
> Helene
>
> On 30/10/2009, LoriStay at aol.com <LoriStay at aol.com> wrote:
>> The story doesn't seem finished, somehow.
>>
>> Also, please have the entire book proofread for proper spelling of the
>> word
>> "than," as well as consistency of tenses and other punctuation problems.
>> Lori
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