[stylist] Plot input.

slery slerythema at insightbb.com
Tue Sep 1 04:54:47 UTC 2009


One question, if there is a problem with the one heart, why would the other
person want it?

Cindy

> -----Original Message-----
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> [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Robert Newman
> Sent: Monday, August 31, 2009 10:35 PM
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> 
> In this day of transplants, this plot looks plausible. So I'd 
> try it. (The real test comes in developing the right title 
> for this scenario- like- "trading Hearts" or "I Beat for You" 
> or "My Heart for Yours" or  ???; not trying to be strictly 
> funny but a title is an eye and mind catcher. Any other 
> suggestions for the title?
> 
> 
> 
> 
> Robert Leslie Newman 
> Email- newmanrl at cox.net
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> -----Original Message-----
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> [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Alan
> Sent: Monday, August 31, 2009 4:48 AM
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> Subject: [stylist] Plot input.
> 
> I have an idea for a short story I want to write, but I want 
> input on the strength of the overall idea.  Is it plausible, 
> or am I asking the reader to suspend disbelief too much?
> 
> Here's the idea, a couple (I haven't determined married or 
> just lovers) is struggling with communicating with and 
> understanding each other.  In a strange twist of fate, one 
> (or both) have a heart condition that allows them to 
> participate in an experimental surgery to literally swap 
> hearts.  The procedure is a success, but as they go the 
> recovery from the surgery, they disover that they now more 
> deeply understand each other.  Granted, yes, I know, 
> something of a fairy tale, but isn't that what some 
> literature is meant to be?
> 
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