[stylist] Plot input.

Alan awheeler at neb.rr.com
Tue Sep 1 08:13:36 UTC 2009


Ah, a point I neglected to mention, the problem would only affect the person 
the heart was born with, not the person it is transplanted to.

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From: "slery" <slerythema at insightbb.com>
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> One question, if there is a problem with the one heart, why would the 
> other
> person want it?
>
> Cindy
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org
>> [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Robert Newman
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>> In this day of transplants, this plot looks plausible. So I'd
>> try it. (The real test comes in developing the right title
>> for this scenario- like- "trading Hearts" or "I Beat for You"
>> or "My Heart for Yours" or  ???; not trying to be strictly
>> funny but a title is an eye and mind catcher. Any other
>> suggestions for the title?
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> Robert Leslie Newman
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>> -----Original Message-----
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>> I have an idea for a short story I want to write, but I want
>> input on the strength of the overall idea.  Is it plausible,
>> or am I asking the reader to suspend disbelief too much?
>>
>> Here's the idea, a couple (I haven't determined married or
>> just lovers) is struggling with communicating with and
>> understanding each other.  In a strange twist of fate, one
>> (or both) have a heart condition that allows them to
>> participate in an experimental surgery to literally swap
>> hearts.  The procedure is a success, but as they go the
>> recovery from the surgery, they disover that they now more
>> deeply understand each other.  Granted, yes, I know,
>> something of a fairy tale, but isn't that what some
>> literature is meant to be?
>>
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