[stylist] "A deafblind girl" or "Dragons and Dumans"

[helene ryles]

Thanks for feedback.
What do you think about "The gift of flight"?
I like this title best due to the double meaning: The dragons want
mankind to become airborne, to make them more like them, and also
'flight' as in escape. Liza and then others all help Nadia get away
from her mother's clutches so they are offering her 'a gift of
flight'.

Helene

On 06/09/2009, James Canaday M.A.  N6YR <n6yr at sunflower.com> wrote:
> Hi Helene,
> I think your proposed new title is a good one.
> I was also thinking of:
> "A deafblind disappointment" as a title or "I'm just a girl."
> jc
>
> Jim Canaday M.A.
> Lawrence, KS
>
>
> At 03:37 PM 9/6/2009, you wrote:
>>I am thinking of changing the title of "The deafblind girl" to something
>> else.
>>
>>A deafblind girl (let me knowif you want to keep the original title)
>>Dragons and Dumans (it was originally called Squib before I decided to
>>scrap the word Squib and replacing it with 'Duman' which also
>>describes someone from a witch family who can't work magic. It's also
>>sent in a country run by dragons.
>>The gift of flight: The dragons have an obsession of making mankind
>>airborne plus flight has another meaning. Nadia spends a lot of this
>>book escaping her mother so the title sort of has a double meaning. I
>>think the 3rd title might work best but I'll keeep it as a Deafblind
>>girl while I send sample chapters to avoid confusing anyone.
>>
>>Please let me know which title you prefere.
>>
>>Helene
>>
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