[stylist] Revised part of chapter 5

helene ryles dreamavdb at googlemail.com
Thu Sep 10 01:54:16 UTC 2009


I've now deleted the part in chapter 5 that I think offended people
(Judith anyway) so now the paragraph just reads:

"One girl tried to show her more tolerance, but she freaked out when
Liza started talking about how much she loved her dragon, and what
they did together.    (I think it was that kind of talk that persuaded
Arielle to bring Liza back to us in the first place)."

I hope that's better and people carry on wanting to read it.

Helene




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