[stylist] DBG 7 (completely new chapter)

[helene ryles]

Hi Lora,
Thanks for getting back to me.
As to the questions:

Why does it take the husband four children to realize what a monster he
married?
He is in denial. He loves this woman even though he must have realised
what she's like. Notice how he realises and is about to get Liza to
care for Nadia, but then afterwards he pulls out and goes back into
being in denial.
What purpose does it serve to have them bring up their daughter as their
son?
Madrella wants a boy. So she simply pretends Nadia is male. It's an
extreme example of parents who will try to mould children into what
they want instead of accepting what they have got. That's madrella's
reason.
As for Mr Murat, it's all part of his denial. Madrella tells him that
Nadia is male so he just goes along with that.
Is it truly necessary to have so many disabled people in the story?
Yes. It's all part of the story.
Do you ever explain why the witch/mother won't admit Nadia is a girl?
I'm hoping it should become aparant by her behaviour.
(Don't forget, I'm reading this as a sample chapter)
Why would anyone cut off a perfectly healthy leg to feed it to a dragon?
The country is run by dragons. Some Dragons just see humans the way we
see other animals.

Helene

On 15/09/2009, LoriStay at aol.com <LoriStay at aol.com> wrote:
> I have to admit, this is a very good question (that is, "What kind of a
> monster have I married?").   I haven't been following the story because we
> went
> away for the weekend but I started to read this to see what you were up to.
>
> So I have questions.
> Why does it take the husband four children to realize what a monster he
> married?
> What purpose does it serve to have them bring up their daughter as their
> son?
> Is it truly necessary to have so many disabled people in the story?
> Do you ever explain why the witch/mother won't admit Nadia is a girl?
> (Don't forget, I'm reading this as a sample chapter)
> Why would anyone cut off a perfectly healthy leg to feed it to a dragon?
> I know the reasons you gave, but can't quite believe them.   You may have
> gone too far here.
>
>  "My wife was a little put out when the cochlear implant failed to
>> work, so she started being a little silly with the staff that works
>> here.
>
> Talk about understatement!
>
>
> If you think these are rude questions or comments, they are the ones that
> any editor will ask.
> Lori
>
> In a message dated 9/15/09 4:06:50 PM, poetlori8 at msn.com writes:
>
>
>>
>> > “Oh Lord! What kind of monster have I married?”
>>
>
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