[stylist] seeking feedback

[Barbara Hammel]

But if it truly is Mars, Mars does not have a golden sun.  It's sun is blue 
around the edges as it rises and sets but otherwise is white or slightly 
blue.  The sky on Mars is pink in the morning and evening but a brownish 
butterscotch during the day.
If it's not truly Mars, have fun with your pink sky and golden sun.  I love 
the pink sky, by the way.
Barbara

If wisdom's ways you wisely seek, five things observe with care:  of whom 
you speak, to whom you speak, and how and when and where.

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From: "Frank Lordi" <timber_wolf899 at yahoo.com>
Sent: Friday, September 18, 2009 10:06 AM
To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Subject: Re: [stylist] seeking feedback

> that's what i get for trusting spell check too much!
>
> also to answer your question, yes tis another world.  Think Mars with 
> slightly higher gravity and a warmer surface temp.
>
> --- On Fri, 9/18/09, LoriStay at aol.com <LoriStay at aol.com> wrote:
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>> From: LoriStay at aol.com <LoriStay at aol.com>
>> Subject: Re: [stylist] seeking feedback
>> To: stylist at nfbnet.org
>> Date: Friday, September 18, 2009, 9:03 AM
>> I'll offer a few comments, but today
>> is a busy day, so it will be limited.
>>  Read on.
>> In a message dated 9/18/09 1:30:55 AM, timber_wolf899 at yahoo.com
>> writes:
>>
>>
>> > hand full
>> >
>>
>> The spelling for this is h a n d f u l.
>>
>>  Edi faces
>> What are Edi faces? Do you mean
>> eddy? (e d d y)
>>
>> Why is the sky pink? Is it a dawn
>> sky? Or are we on another world?
>>
>> straitened
>> I think the word you want is
>> straightened: s t r a i g h t e n e d
>>
>> fort ht he
>> Need a little proofing here
>>
>>  shimmered and shown
>> Shown? Or Shone: S h o n
>> e
>>
>> your writing is elegant. Keep it up!
>> Lori
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