[stylist] seeking feedback

[Frank Lordi]

that's what i get for trusting spell check too much!

also to answer your question, yes tis another world.  Think Mars with slightly higher gravity and a warmer surface temp.

--- On Fri, 9/18/09, LoriStay at aol.com <LoriStay at aol.com> wrote:

> From: LoriStay at aol.com <LoriStay at aol.com>
> Subject: Re: [stylist] seeking feedback
> To: stylist at nfbnet.org
> Date: Friday, September 18, 2009, 9:03 AM
> I'll offer a few comments, but today
> is a busy day, so it will be limited.  
>  Read on.
> In a message dated 9/18/09 1:30:55 AM, timber_wolf899 at yahoo.com
> writes:
> 
> 
> > hand full
> > 
> 
> The spelling for this is h a n d f u l.
> 
>  Edi faces
> What are Edi faces?   Do you mean
> eddy?   (e d d y)
> 
> Why is the sky pink?   Is it a dawn
> sky?   Or are we on another world?
> 
> straitened
> I think the word you want is
> straightened:   s t r a i g h t e n e d
> 
> fort ht he
> Need a little proofing here
> 
>  shimmered and shown
> Shown?   Or Shone:   S h o n
> e
> 
> your writing is elegant.   Keep it up!
> Lori
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