[stylist] Flirting with Monday chapter 7
Barbara Hammel
poetlori8 at msn.com
Tue Sep 22 18:57:18 UTC 2009
Oh my goodness, I remember being that sick about twelve years ago! It seems
just like yesterday when I think of how quick that headache came on and how
sick I was.
Barbara
If wisdom's ways you wisely seek, five things observe with care: of whom
you speak, to whom you speak, and how and when and where.
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> Chapter 7
>
>
>
> I climbed down the eight foot ladder from the locomotive, glad to have a
> three hour break. My head pounded, my eyes ached, my nose and teeth and
> jaw surrounded by what felt like a thousand bolts of pain.
>
>
>
> "hey you," a cheerful voice piped up beside me. Right then I thought it
> was my angel from heaven. But I shied away a bit like Vincent in a sulky
> mood.
>
>
>
> "What's the matter?"
>
>
>
> She caught up with me, the subtle fragrance of flowers surrounding her. I
> headed relentlessly toward the station. Judy kept pace beside me, not
> saying anything. I pushed open the station door. The lights flickered. The
> simple murmur of human voices crashed against my throbbing head in painful
> waves. I found the nearest bench and dropped onto it in relief. Judy
> joined me. I put my hands over my eyes.
>
>
>
> "Glenn," she said with concern. "You don't look very well at all."
>
>
>
> She put her hand on my shoulder. I didn't have the strength to push her
> away.
>
>
>
> "Let's tell John your conductor you're not finishing the route," she said
> matter-of-factly.
>
>
>
> "No." I insisted. "I have a break. I can sleep for a while. I'll feel
> better."
>
>
>
> "You're not finishing your route," she insisted as if I were five years
> old and she was my mother. My shoulders sagged, I buried my face deeper in
> my hands. Judy rubbed my shoulder.
>
>
>
> "What's wrong," she asked now, backing off, somehow knowing she was
> invading some unspoken personal space.
>
>
>
> "headache," I said.
>
>
>
> "You have more than a headache. You look sick and pale and exhausted and
> troubled. You just look miserable. I'm driving you to the doctor. Where's
> your insurance card?"
>
>
>
> "You have to go to work," I insisted weakly, knowing she was right about
> all of it.
>
>
>
> "no," she said reassuringly, "Not today. I came down here for lunch and I
> saw your train get in so I came out to meet you. I've got time." Her
> explanation halted any of my other excuses. "Come on, Glenn," she said
> gently. "You're not fit to finish that shift. You're not concentrating.
> Your eyes are red. Don't endanger yourself or anyone else. Come on,
> Glenn," she said as if coaxing a child to do the right thing, "where's
> your conductor. We'll tell him you're not finishing your route."
>
>
>
> I don't know that I could have stopped Judy from driving me to the doctor
> in my own car, and then driving me back home and settling me on my own
> couch with a blanket and pillow. She was a source of comfort that day,
> even if I didn't want to admit it. We waited at the urgent care for a long
> time and then they told me I had acute sinusitis and sent me home with
> medication and told me to drink plenty of fluids and inhale steam and rest
> and call out of work. I wasn't going to be much interested in that for a
> while said the overly cheerful doctor as he looked at my x-rays.
>
>
>
> I remember Judy covering me and removing my shoes, caressing my head. I
> couldn't quite push her away though I wanted to. Closing my eyes helped
> the headache and the medicine was starting to put me to sleep. Judy knelt
> beside me for a long time as if invoking some kind of prayer. I curled up
> only glad not to be confirming signals with John. There hadn't really been
> any question about me not finishing the shift. I'm not even sure how I got
> through the first part of it. The headache wasn't so bad in the morning,
> but by the time we got to the middle of the route pain had exploded behind
> my right eye, making its way down through my cheek and jaw, slowly,
> insidiously robbing me of my strength. Now, hours later, under the first
> dose of medication and the first steam treatment, my discomfort was
> easing. I just wanted to sleep.
>
> I turned my head to look at Judy.
>
>
>
> "Thank you," I said wearily.
>
>
>
> "you're welcome," she said, her fingers cool on mine. "I will leave you to
> yourself. I'm going to walk to the bus stop," she said and go back to the
> station. I'll call you tomorrow," she squeezed my hand, I turned away,
> easing my distressed head. She rubbed my shoulder and made her way quietly
> out of my house. I didn't want her to come back, and at the same time I
> didn't want her to go away. She had probably saved my life and many
> others. I shuddered to think of it.
>
>
>
> I awoke to feel something warm on my face. I was in my bed. I must have
> gotten up in the middle of the afternoon and gone to bed. I felt a little
> bit better, my head didn't hurt so much, I could breathe. I coughed a
> little, I could taste the post nasal drip in the back of my throat. It was
> better than the awful pounding fury of a headache keeping the rhythm of a
> freight train moving along at high speed. The thing on my face whimpered,
> it was warm. I reached out a hand and felt a head, a pair of ears.
> Vincent. Vincent my year old puppy had crawled up on my pillow. I didn't
> usually let him do that, but I didn't move to push the puppy away. I would
> just have to deal with it all later. Vincent whimpered.
>
>
>
> "Hi," I said, groggy from medicine and sleep. I rested my hand on the
> dog's sleek wiry smooth fur. The warm bundle breathed under my hand, his
> tongue flicked out and he licked me under my right eye. I laughed a little
> and shifted under my blanket. I still couldn't quite contemplate getting
> out of bed. But nature called and so I moved quietly to leave the comfort
> zone, surprised that my head did not protest as I stood to my six foot two
> inch height and stretched. Vincent jumped down on the floor and pranced
> about. Something about Vincent always had a way of lifting my spirits. I
> don't know what it was; maybe he was just always happy. I did my business
> and decided to explore things. The house lay sleeping, the curtains
> slightly open to a quiet, gentle day. I looked up at a train clock on the
> wall between my living room and dining room. The time flashed 3:30 pm. I
> looked out the window, to the small expanse of yard I hardly had time to
> cultivate. Working fifty-plus hours didn't leave much time for gardening.
> In my little town in Oregon I had at least had a garden of some sort but
> here there was hardly time for that. I coughed and remembered why I wasn't
> at work today. Thank God I could draw sick pay. I sat back in my chair,
> watching the ceiling fan blades whir, the air cooling my face. My bare
> feet felt the cool tile, I stretched. The dull pain that had wakened me in
> the morning warned me of the impending headache and I sighed. I found the
> medicine on the dining table. I swallowed it with some water and sat back,
> waiting for relief. The refrigerator motor whirred into life, the clock
> ticked on the mantle, Vincent's paws pattered gently as he came in the
> kitchen to find me. I leaned my head on my hands, rubbing at my eyes, not
> really willing to get up and go to bed, comfortable here, existing in a
> fog. If I sat still my head wouldn't protest so much so I let the silence
> surround me and my mind drift. It drifted as it was accustomed to doing
> lately to the woman who was slowly turning my life upside down. The
> amazing thing I thought as the fog deepened and my head eased, was that I
> was letting her in one slow step at a time. Take this morning for
> instance. It seemed that Judy always showed up at the right time, or at
> least out of nowhere. This morning I remember her saying that she had come
> down to the station for lunch. Something in the back of a foggy head
> wondered if sometimes she just came down to see me. That conversation
> seemed to have taken place so long ago. It was funny how sometimes she
> just appeared out of nowhere. She appeared one day, said hello, then we
> were having coffee, she was comforting me when my train hit a pedestrian,
> then she was inviting me to her new Year's party. Here she was again today
> appearing it seemed out of the blue, like an angel at the right time.
>
>
>
> After I took her to dinner and paid that time, I didn't see Judy till her
> New Year's party. At the Thai restaurant after the meal I gave her my
> card.
>
>
>
> "Here's my phone number," I said. "Call me and leave the details about
> your New Year's day party. You can tell me before that, but just call me
> and leave them. I'll write them down on my calendar."
>
>
>
> Judy had smiled at me.
>
>
>
> "Goody," she had said almost like a child. "I'll do that. Bring a dish
> with you if you like, or just show up.
>
>
>
> Being in Judy's house had been like being in a whirlwind of activity.
> There was food and drink and Judy flitting around introducing everyone to
> everyone else. I sat in awe of her sparkle. I held my own court
> eventually, when people found out what I did for a living they had all
> kinds of questions and I had all kinds of answers. I could tell them
> stories of being in far off places across country, people I had met, train
> stories, near misses, but mostly of looking out the windows and seeing
> endless beautiful scenery, especially the mountains. There was something
> comforting about mountains. Despite myself, I found that I enjoyed the
> evening very much.
>
>
>
> The whirlwind ended around 10:00 pm everyone had to go to work the next
> day, Everyone but me. I had taken an extra vacation day. I lingered on her
> porch. She had a swing on her porch, a shelf with some nice green plants.
> She pointed to the swing and we sat down on it.
>
>
>
> "You must be exhausted," I said, looking at her face for signs of
> weariness. I was awake, I knew I didn't have to get up early tomorrow so I
> could just relax.
>
>
>
> "A little bit," she said. "But I'm fine. I always enjoy these parties."
>
>
>
> "Yes, you look like you do," I said, just relishing the quiet. "You don't
> mind if I sit here for a few minutes do you?"
>
>
>
> "Not at all," she said. "I am not going to be sleepy for a while anyway.
> I'm off work till Monday I took a few extra vacation days."
>
>
>
> "I'm off till Monday," I said. "Looking forward to the weekend."
>
>
>
> "What are you going to do during the weekend?"
>
>
>
> "I don't know," I said truthfully. "I'm not all that exciting. I might
> clean up after Vincent and Magnet. I'm going to go and get some supplies
> to build an enclosure in the back yard." Just little things."
>
>
>
> Silence passed between us for a few moments. I looked up at stars shining
> like little colorful dots in the sky.
>
>
>
> "Hey," she said suddenly remembering something, "did I see you go into the
> kitchen and do some dishes?"
>
>
>
> "I just put some things away," I said, "and loaded your dish washer."
>
>
>
> "Wow," she enthused, "You're something! You do trains and dishes. I'm
> impressed."
>
>
>
> "I do other things besides trains," I said. "I like to cook. I didn't see
> any of the rice left I brought."
>
>
>
> "Good," she said. "And the spaghetti with Italian sausage? Does it pass
> muster?"
>
>
>
> I thought about it for a minute. Everything had been stunningly delicious.
> I nodded.
>
>
>
> "You see," she gushed, her voice inflected with happiness, "I told you
> you'd like it. I'm glad you came, Glenn."
>
>
>
> Judy's hand lay on her knee. I very tentatively reached over and put my
> fingers on it. She took my hand, holding it gently. I looked at her. She
> was a serene harbor in what for me had been a very hectic world. I sat
> there just enjoying it for a moment. She turned my hand in her's,
> inspecting my fingers, her gaze lingering on my class ring.
>
>
>
> "You graduated from my high school," she said suddenly.
>
>
>
> "I graduated from high school in Oregon," I said. "You went to high school
> in Oregon?"
>
>
>
> "Yeah," she said. "I did. I spent some time there. My parents were
> military, I went there for a year. I was a freshman the year you
> graduated." She looked at my class ring again, her hand warm on my skin.
> My heart began to lurch with a familiar dread and anticipation. I could
> feel another layer of defense crumbling. I sat still for a moment letting
> the wave of distress come over me, and then relaxed as it subsided. I
> grasped her hand a little bit tighter.
>
>
>
> "What's wrong, Glenn," she said seeing the storminess in my eyes. "You
> look a little upset."
>
>
>
> "I'm not upset," I said quietly. But I couldn't tell her about Elizabeth
> and my little girl. Not today. I just wanted to enjoy the moment. It was
> so calm. Judy looked troubled.
>
>
>
> ""Please," I said. "Just let me sit here for a minute. It's so peaceful
> here. I need to be here."
>
> Judy sat on the swing with me for a few more minutes. The swing rocked
> gently back and forth, calming my reluctance. Eventually Judy was going to
> ask me what was wrong and I was going to have to tell her. But I would try
> to hold off as long as I could. It was silly really, but I wasn't ready to
> tell her about Allison May.
>
> "Why don't you come to my place on Sunday," I ventured, "we could watch a
> movie and you could meet Magnet and Vincent. Eventually we'll have a third
> dog to put in the mix. I don't want any more than three. That's enough
> with my hours and trying to keep peace in the family." I laughed a little,
> it really was a family. "I'll make dinner."
>
>
>
> Judy sat back, her face quiet. She had decided not to push whatever was
> troubling me to the surface.
>
>
>
> "Glenn," she said. "I would love that. I just want you to know," she said,
> holding both my hands now, "I know that something is up you keep pulling
> away from me. But I'm not going to force you to tell me anything. I'm just
> going to be your friend and enjoy your company. You're very calming to me.
> I have a very hectic life. Even if I don't see you that much when I do
> it's peaceful."
>
>
>
> "Okay," I said, squeezing her hands, feeling bad about not being able to
> tell her anything, but happy she was willing to let things lie for the
> moment. "What time do you want to come over on Sunday?"
>
>
>
> She thought about it. Then she got up and I followed her. She walked me to
> the front porch and her wooden gate.
>
>
>
> "Three o'clock," she said firmly. "I have church in the morning then I'll
> go over in the afternoon. Send me directions to your house. I don't' even
> know where it is."
>
>
>
> The phone rang, interrupting my memories. The sound of the electronic tone
> stirred up my headache. I groaned. I would have to answer the phone to
> stop it from making me feel so ill.
>
>
>
> "Glenn?" a woman's voice questioned. "Glenn you're at home." A note of
> surprise filled her voice with the question. I sat there for a moment,
> searching my memory through the haze of medicated relief, trying to
> identify the caller. I turned my hand to see the digital readout on my
> phone.
>
>
>
> "Debbie," I said. "I didn't recognize you."
>
>
>
> "I would hardly recognize you, sweetheart, not with the way you're
> sounding right now. What's wrong? You are home today? You have the day
> off?"
>
>
>
> Debbie was my friend, the lady who had sold me Magnet six months earlier.
> Magnet and Vincent were getting along nicely, we were going to throw
> another puppy in the mix.
>
>
>
> "I called to let you know that I was in the area today if you wanted me to
> bring angel buy late evening. I can put her in the car with me when I come
> out to your neck of the woods. I have to drop off some proofs."
>
>
>
> I sat back in my chair and sighed. I really didn't want company but if she
> was going to be in the area. My eyes started to feel as if there was a
> great pressure building behind them. I didn't know if I could make it that
> late.
>
>
>
> "Not today," I suddenly said. "I'm home, sick. I have a very bad sinus
> infection," I explained, "I'm just on my way back to bed."
>
>
>
> "Oh," she cooed, "poor baby!"
>
>
>
> Debby was a ball of energy on most days, today was no exception. I sat
> silently, not encouraging her responses.
>
>
>
> "Glenn, I'm glad to see someone made you stay home, I'm sure it wasn't
> you."
>
>
>
> I laughed despite myself. I didn't have the energy to tell her about this
> morning's adventure with Judy. I hadn't told Debby about Judy, I wasn't
> going to do it now.
>
>
>
> "Tomorrow you think?" she continued without asking any more questions.
>
>
>
> "Probably. I hope so. Call me in the afternoon. I'm ready for her," I
> explained patiently. "Just not today. Give her hugs and kisses."
>
>
>
> "I will," she said. "DO you need anything tomorrow?"
>
>
>
> I thought of Judy asking me the same question. I was lucky to have such
> people asking after me, but right now all I wanted was to go to sleep and
> escape my mounting discomfort. I refused politely and ended the
> conversation. I retreated to my room and curled up, hiding not only from
> my illness, but my changing feelings. Part of me was worried about having
> to tell the truth to Judy eventually, and yet part of me wanted to do
> that. It would be a secret relief.
>
>
> Shelley J. Alongi
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