[stylist] More split chapters.

helene ryles dreamavdb at googlemail.com
Thu Sep 24 21:46:18 UTC 2009


I've been advised to give more explanation about the constant school
transferes in chapter 9, but I can't do it from Nadia's point of view
since Nadia is at that moment in time a very shell shocked child.

So now I'll have to write a new chapter in the middle from Liza's
point of view.

Chapter 9 will now end when Nadia's father leaves home.
New chapter 10 will be dealing with how Liza is feeling around that
time and all the complaints at the station.
New chapter 11 will be the second half of chapter 9 with a few ajustments.
chapter 12 (was chapter 10) will be the court case. Minus the pasage
where Liza finds the police uniform, and Katrina's letter.

What do other readers think?

Helene




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