[stylist] chapter one

[loristay]

To be grammatically correct, dashes are used in pairs, to separate a phrase from the rest of the sentence, so a dash is incorrect here.
Lori
On May 24, 2010, at 5:30:58 PM, "Donna Hill" <penatwork at epix.net> wrote:

From:   "Donna Hill" <penatwork at epix.net>
Subject:    Re: [stylist] chapter one
Date:   May 24, 2010 5:30:58 PM EDT
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Judith,
I personally would use a dash. I think a comma is definitely not right.
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Judith Bron wrote:
> Isn't this a comma splice? I made the change, but have this question.
>
> Jennifer allowed her thoughts to return to that dark corridor and all 
> inclusive feeling of love, a feeling she never had before.
> ----- Original Message ----- From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com>
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> I guess you missed it. I did quote it in the message. See below. It 
> needs a comma, doesn't have one, though. You put a period instead, but 
> shouldn't have.
> Lori
> On May 24, 2010, at 3:00:52 PM, "Judith Bron" <jbron at optonline.net> 
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> Jennifer allowed her thoughts to return to that dark corridor and all
> inclusive feeling of love. A feeling she never had before.
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