[stylist] Punctuation question

Angela Fowler fowlers at syix.com
Tue May 25 04:35:01 UTC 2010


Hey guys, is this sentence punctuated correctly?
 
"We will see that belonging to an organization, being a contributing member
of something which is effecting all of humanity for the better, has had a
tremendous impact on my life."

 

I'm wondering if the commas should be replaced with something else?

thanks

Angela




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